clip evaluation ( tim burtons 9)

As the clip starts , i decided it would be in the cathedral with a purple window, the floor is made of wood and the walls are plain bricks. Number 9 and number 1 are arguing and a strange flying thing passes the cathedral window, makes them to look out of the window as it flies past and the camera follows it quickly. I have added in a swooping noise of the bird robot, passing by.
Number 1 knows there is something wrong, so he starts to back away in fear using a full body shot. At this point, a sound that signals something is drawing near plays before the robot bird smashes threw the window and scatters all the characters around and leaves glass all of the floor.
As it lands, the bird knocks over a bowl that has a fire lit inside, i have added the sound of something metal but with a low bass so its sounds heavy.
Everything calms down and the bird takes it time to move and i get a close up shot of the bird coming in towards the others and a loud thud of the bird digging its claw into the wooden floor.
The characters begin to move as the bird descends upon them and the bird stops and screams at the four of them. The scene goes on to find out that number 1 was hiding behind a board but the board falls down and a sound effect has been added to it. The robots attention is drawn to him with the small sound of grinding metal.
As soon as the board hits the floor, music plays. Its a orchestra playing a fast paced sound and on a rather high note to create tension.

ideas for video ( haiku) 2

I picked my poem first before making my video and then put the righting on after. Some shots were slightly to dark and needed to made a bit lighter.
I did five shots so i could use different ones or change things slightly.

ideas for video ( haiku)

We are asked to film a video with 3 clips. The first one being 5 seconds long , the next one being 7 seconds long and the last being 5 seconds long.
For my video, i will look online for poem examples and use them as ideas. Maybe using a poem that involves nature and animals.

Haiku movie

diary 2

Yesterday i took in my video clips to be edited. The film took some time to do as music wouldn't be added to it.

diary 1

finished my video yesterday, took about half an hour. Could have gone better but overall i am happy with the videos that i've got.

film ideas 2

i will need a shot list and edit decision list, also i will need t pick a member of family or the community and let us know what you like about them and why ( slides and writing in the film).
could be an interview type video or ' a day in the life' and no longer than 1 min

film plan

Over the next few days, i will have to film something i like so i can edit the film in next weeks lesson. i will have to decide what i m going to film and what i will need to go with the film.